FEEDBACK
Today, we realised that our idea was creative yet not realistic, we received feedback from our teachers in which we reflected on and have decided to adapt our scene accordingly.
The first thing we realised was by having a bath filled with fake blood, although most likely appearing effective the chances are it would stain due to baths usually being white. Consequently whom ever's bath it is will be left with an expense.
We also came to the conclusion that flashbacks are not usually placed at the start of the film due to it leaving the viewer confused and wondering what is really going on.
From this feedback we've decided that we are going to use the same story line in order to come up with a new opening scene, maybe setting it from where the woman gets arrested with her response being more in shock rather than her crying hysterically this will make the viewer question is she guilty or is she not?
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