Idea 1 For An Opening Scene

CONCEPT-  IDEA 1 

Genre- horror

Lighting- yellow/dark to create an eerie feel and to reflect being set a while ago.

Opening scene outline-

A young attractive girl  walking down a dead quiet , noiseless street in the late evening with her headphones in,  Listening to a 50's upbeat yet slightly creepy song.

 Here the camera will be capturing her  with the viewer hearing the music being played within her headphones. Then the girl will approach an isolated bus stop where she sits down after looking at the bus list with a look of  irritation. Following this the music cuts due to the girls phone dying, here the girl now has gone from happy to looking slightly worried and on edge. Once the phone dies there is a weird atmosphere created due to the utter silence left with only the odd sound of the bushes rustling or bird tweeting.

Then a bus comes along and as it drives past the bus stop without stopping to pick up the girl there is a POV shot from the girl. A male figure appears through the seams of the two  windows on the other side of the street, which is seen to be staring straight at her, but then quickly disappears after the buss passes leaving the street empty and silent.  Here the scene cuts.

Throughout the sequence the sound of her heartbeat increases untill its left with the empty silent street and only the sound of the hightend heartbeat.

 The Rest of the films Narrative Briefly 

The rest of the film would unfold to exclaim that the boy whom the girl saw through the window is in fact her twin brother who passed away two years ago after being abused by their father. Their connection was always strong from when they were young. He has come back as a ghost to connect with her twin sister in order for her to play out the part of killing her father through horrific manners which he will be stood next to her throughout, however her father cannot hear or see him, it is only she that can do so. It's as if he is stood right next to her. 

It was told that he died from a drug overdose but as the film unfolds it was in fact the father that killed him, consequently he's back for revenge.